Post by takeachance on Feb 8, 2012 4:53:10 GMT -5
One week later, I was still bummed because I didn’t have a copy of Greyson’s album to listen to.
My mom said if I could take my little sister Dakota to the park, so I said yes because I didn’t really have anything to do since I lost my copy of Greyson’s album.
While Dakota and I were strolling in the park, I listened to the trees rustling and admired the peaceful park. But then, I was hit by a ball in the head.
“OUCH!” I said.
Then I heard a familiar voice, and it said “ I’m so sorry. Are you alright?”
Then I opened my eyes, to my surprise, I saw Greyson Chance!!!
“Yeah, my head just hurt.” I said to him.
“I’m so so so so really sorry!” He said.
“It’s alright.” I replied.
Then he dragged me to the park bench and said “ You look familiar, do I know you?”
Then I suddenly remembered, I left my copy to Greyson.
“Yes. I think I left my album with you.” I said to him.
“Oh yeah! Avery right?” he said.
“Oh my gosh! You remembered!” I said.
“How could I forget you, you were the most interesting to talk to. And you were the first one who actually left her copy to me.” He said.
“I’m sorry!” I said.
He just laughed and said, “Stop over at my house later, I’ll give you back you’re album copy” he said.
“Oh thank you!” I said.
“Where do you live anyway?” He asked.
I pointed at my house.
“You live that close to the park?” He said.
“Yeah.” I said.
“Lucky! I spend most of my time here, but I don’t see you a lot.” He said.
“Ohh… That’s because, I don’t go here a lot.” I said.
“Change of plans, I’ll deliver your album copy to your house instead.” He said.
“Sure.” I said. Then my sister, who totally ruined the moment, and cried and she yelled “ I’m hungry!!!”
Oh…she’s not good in timing!
So I said to Greyson, “ See you later! I gotta feed my sister. See you at my house, 5:00p.m.?” I said.
“Oh sure. And sorry about your head again!” He said.
“Don’t worry about it” I said. Then I walked away.
When I was inside my house, I shut the door behind me, and whispered to myself “ I love this day!”
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My mom said if I could take my little sister Dakota to the park, so I said yes because I didn’t really have anything to do since I lost my copy of Greyson’s album.
While Dakota and I were strolling in the park, I listened to the trees rustling and admired the peaceful park. But then, I was hit by a ball in the head.
“OUCH!” I said.
Then I heard a familiar voice, and it said “ I’m so sorry. Are you alright?”
Then I opened my eyes, to my surprise, I saw Greyson Chance!!!
“Yeah, my head just hurt.” I said to him.
“I’m so so so so really sorry!” He said.
“It’s alright.” I replied.
Then he dragged me to the park bench and said “ You look familiar, do I know you?”
Then I suddenly remembered, I left my copy to Greyson.
“Yes. I think I left my album with you.” I said to him.
“Oh yeah! Avery right?” he said.
“Oh my gosh! You remembered!” I said.
“How could I forget you, you were the most interesting to talk to. And you were the first one who actually left her copy to me.” He said.
“I’m sorry!” I said.
He just laughed and said, “Stop over at my house later, I’ll give you back you’re album copy” he said.
“Oh thank you!” I said.
“Where do you live anyway?” He asked.
I pointed at my house.
“You live that close to the park?” He said.
“Yeah.” I said.
“Lucky! I spend most of my time here, but I don’t see you a lot.” He said.
“Ohh… That’s because, I don’t go here a lot.” I said.
“Change of plans, I’ll deliver your album copy to your house instead.” He said.
“Sure.” I said. Then my sister, who totally ruined the moment, and cried and she yelled “ I’m hungry!!!”
Oh…she’s not good in timing!
So I said to Greyson, “ See you later! I gotta feed my sister. See you at my house, 5:00p.m.?” I said.
“Oh sure. And sorry about your head again!” He said.
“Don’t worry about it” I said. Then I walked away.
When I was inside my house, I shut the door behind me, and whispered to myself “ I love this day!”
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